August 4, 2012

Something in me shed like snake-skin
Mole-eyed and chilled,
I crawled out of the damp earth.

© paz


Another one from my little notebook.

3 Responses to “7.29.12”

  1. Interesting images. I especially like the first line. I write poetry myself (not as much lately), so I know this is sometimes impossible, but you might try expanding this. It’s got potential.

    • PAZ said

      Thank you Purplemary. I had written a lot of poetry on this blog a few months ago, but not so much lately. I appreciate your insight. I guess I could go on with it, but I kind of wanted this to be a small stone and just end like that. Although, now, I’m considering your suggestion. 🙂

    • PAZ said

      p.s. Would like to read your poetry.

Spit it!

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: