Hammer, A Senryu

August 20, 2012

Hammer this iron,
this tongue. Oh murderous rage —
strike my scalding mold.

© paz


Thanks for the inspiration Le Sailor!


3 Responses to “Hammer, A Senryu”

  1. This is so pretty P, even if it’s not pretty. Its so clever! xoxoxoxox

    • PAZ said

      Thank you Le lovely Sailor! Your post brought it on. I changed scathing to scalding because that’s the word I was thinking of but couldn’t remember it at the time.

  2. boomiebol said

    Thanks so much for stopping by my blog

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