Attention!

September 17, 2012

Standing at attention
trembling
little
soldier
waiting for his order.

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Haven’t been inspired with the poetic muse lately. But I woke up with this one in my head and had to jot it down. I think it was inspired by Kyle Mew.

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5 Responses to “Attention!”

  1. Kyle said

    awaiting your orders ma’am

  2. I like the way you break the lines. It gives it a sort of anticipation.

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